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I was reading [livejournal.com profile] herinfiniteeyes's latest porn on AO3 and it inspired me to write something quick and dirty. As with most porn I write, I had a single picture in my head of Eames giving Arthur a good hard smack on the ass while fucking him. Along the way it picked up some of my favourite edging images, and a voyeurism kink.

Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~700
Warnings: None
Summary: Ariadne stops by to see if Arthur wants a ride to dinner. She stumbles across Arthur and Eames in the middle of something altogether quite personal.

Obstructed View



The sound of a smack is loud and Ariadne jumps, eyes going wide. She quiets her breathing and with silent footsteps moves towards the door to the living room of Arthur’s rented townhouse. She’d been surprised when he hadn’t answered her knocks, and alarmed to find the door unlocked. The startling crack of a skin on skin has her frightened of what she’ll see.

The door is half open and she hangs back, peeking through the crack between the door and the jamb.

Her eyes widen once more, this time in shock as she sees Arthur bent over and leaning on the arm of the sofa, resting on his elbows. He lets out a pained and desperate cry, then returns to whimpering and rocking his body back and forth. Eames is fucking him hard, pushing Arthur’s shirt up out of the way, half stepping on the trousers that lay pooled, still caught on one of Arthur’s ankles. Eames pulls back, not quite fully withdrawing and smacks again across the bright pink of Arthur’s flesh, at the crease between ass and thigh and Arthur’s flesh jiggles with the impact.

“You like that? What do you want, you want me to fuck you harder?” Eames asks, voice rough.

Arthur replies, a simple reshaping of his whimper, “Yeah. Oh fuck, yeah. Harder.”

Eames cracks him sharply once more before picking up the pace, shoving his cock roughly into Arthur’s reddened hole.

Craning to see more, Ariadne shifts back and forth to sweep the whole scene. It’s maddening taking it in in slivers, but she doesn’t dare move further into the room.

Arthur pushes himself up onto his hands and Eames presses him back down, cool as you please. In fact, Eames shows only the slightest signs of fatigue, the vaguest sheen of sweat on his bare back, his trousers down far enough to partially reveal his ass muscles flexing as he thrusts.

The whimpering has been constant, but it’s apparently not enough for Eames because he commands, “Moan for me, let me hear you. Let me hear how badly you need to be fucked.”

Arthur complies, a long, loud groan uttered towards the ground as he rests his head on his forearms. He reaches down between his legs and rubs frantically at his cock for a second before letting go like he’s been burned, fingers flexing and twitching with the desire to jerk himself. His cock, angry red and hard, bounces and twitches.

“Eames, I wanna come,” Arthur begs. “I wanna come I wanna come,” he chants like a mantra, like he’s been thinking it so long the words have lost their meaning.

“Not yet, just hold on,” Eames says, spreading Arthur open with one hand, fingers digging roughly into his flesh. “Hold on a little more, love, just a little more.” Arthur rapidly jerks again twice, and lets go just as suddenly, shaking with need.

Ariadne wonders how long Arthur’s been waiting already. Unconsciously she slips her hand into her jeans, rubbing at herself over her panties.

Eames grips Arthur’s hips with both hands and drives in, his breath finally coming in audible huffs. He leans over Arthur’s form and reaches under, lightly cradling Arthur’s cock before murmuring, so quietly Ariadne strains to catch it, “Come with me. You’re so good, waiting. Come with me, Arthur.”

The mewl that comes from Arthur then sounds like he’s crying with relief as Eames rocks into him and jerks his cock once, twice, and then Arthur comes, shuddering and tense and Eames huffs into Arthur’s hair, his groan mingling with Arthur’s sounds, nearly drowned out.

Realizing in a panic that her cover noise is about to stop, Ariadne tears herself away from the scene and slips out the front door, struggling to calm her heartbeat and relax the jitteriness at almost being caught. She climbs in her car and simply sits for a minute, collecting herself.

When she arrives at the restaurant, Cobb is already there. He looks behind her.

“I thought you were stopping to see if Arthur needed a ride,” he says.

“No, I think Eames is taking care of it,” she replies. “Maybe we should just order without them.” She picks up her menu quickly to hide her smirk.

**End**

Date: 2011-10-02 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fitz-y.livejournal.com
UNF. ::IZ DEAD:: wow, you hit like all my kinks in one PWP. damn, woman!

Date: 2011-10-02 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Hahaha! Nice, glad I hit a bunch of things you like. And in a short 700 words. Also, jesus christ you're fast. O_O <3 <3 <3

Date: 2011-10-02 06:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] just-jane-doe.livejournal.com
Damn right, Eames took care of it... but(t) good! Very sexy fic - just the right amount of Ariadne's perspective and a perfect description of how the boys looked in the heat of it all.

Date: 2011-10-02 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
I do have a weakness for totallyincontrol!Eames. I've had a voyeurism thing nebulously in my queue for some time, and it reared its head here. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2011-10-02 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neomeruru.livejournal.com
“No, I think Eames is taking care of it.”

And how. Jesus.

Date: 2011-10-02 07:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
I do love Eames taking charge. Mmmhmm. *daydreams some more*

Date: 2011-10-02 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twisted-ream.livejournal.com
lol I'm forever Ariadne in this
I would've settled in though and had some complete fun watching.
Oh my god this has been a naughty comment.

Date: 2011-10-02 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
I toyed with the idea of using someone else to watch, but it just seemed quite like her to be comfortable ignoring personal boundaries. :D And yeah, I don't think anyone could be blamed for wanting to watch that scene. Jesus.

Date: 2011-10-02 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dremiel.livejournal.com
Mmmmm! Lovely scene.

Now, it would be great fun to peak in on the restaurant scene as well. Does Ariadne see different things now?

Date: 2011-10-02 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Thank you! A did actually have bits of the restaurant scene in my head but decided against writing it as I thought it was just drag things out and be anticlimactic. However, I was going to Arthur and Eames showing up perfectly put together, Eames smiling and friendly, Arthur relaxed but reserved, betraying nothing of their activities. Ariadne was going to watch closely to see if Arthur sat gingerly or anything, but Arthur gives nothing away and catches her at it, just raises his eyebrow slightly. Ariadne finds the whole thing maddening.

Date: 2011-10-02 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bottledminx.livejournal.com
*passes out*
Christ I feel dirty for having read that at work surrounded by little old ladies who think I'm oh so sweet <3
You are the best.

Date: 2011-10-02 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
I love that you read these things in public. As I prefer to write in public and read fic in public, I do believe you and I are porny kindred spirits. ♥

Date: 2011-10-02 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hungerpunch.livejournal.com
hot hot hot hot *-* i just like imagining how long eames kept arthur on edge there; i like that we see it from ariadne's POV so we never know! deliciously teasing fic >)

Date: 2011-10-02 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Yeah, I sat pondering the title for a while and just kept thinking how maddening it was that Ariadne didn't get to see more for longer, and how I'd be dying to see/hear/know the whole story.

I do also have a much longer edging fic plotted and begun in another doc, with a setup and everything. Sadly, I really, really, really must work on my big bang if I have a hope in hell of finishing it on time, given its ever-expanding scope. /o\

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Date: 2011-10-02 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eamesie.livejournal.com
And boy, does Eames take care of it ♥
Damn, Ariadne is so lucky ;___;

Date: 2011-10-02 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Isn't she, though? God, I love edging and incontrol!Eames and whimpering Arthur, and... damnit. This is why I keep getting distracted. <3

Date: 2011-10-02 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anne-jumps.livejournal.com
his trousers down far enough to partially reveal his ass muscles flexing as he thrusts

WELL HELLO THERE MENTAL IMAGE.

Date: 2011-10-02 08:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Eames's ass does not get enough description. I've been guilty of this, I admit. But it is a spectacular ass. :D

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Date: 2011-10-02 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sionnach-ayame.livejournal.com
Eames-in-charge is totally a kink of mine and I can't get enough of it. This was...delicious and wonderful!! ♥

Date: 2011-10-02 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Why thank you, and me too! Maybe someday I'll write something that isn't just a love letter to these two, but that day won't be coming soon, I think. :D

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Date: 2011-10-02 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] build-the-moon.livejournal.com
Unf, so hot.

<3

Date: 2011-10-02 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. <3

Date: 2011-10-02 10:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adelaide-rain.livejournal.com
Unf. Yes. To everything. All of it. Arthur being fuckedover the edge of the sofa, what a beautiful image.

Date: 2011-10-02 11:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Isn't it, though? Yum. Sometimes I feel all I do is write words and the real work is done by these two just being so fucking hot and easy to imagine.

Date: 2011-10-03 12:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herinfiniteeyes.livejournal.com
I feel privileged to have inspired this:-D

Also, I was soooo expecting Ariadne to order Cobb back to her bunk. I mean, she needs to get some after walking in on that, amirite???

*Has an imaginary mental gif of Eames fucking Arthur over the couch*

<3<3

Date: 2011-10-03 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Haha! I was kind of thinking of Ariadne and Cobb as pre-couple here, and this would certainly get Ariadne going enough to push the boundary. :D

And seriously, your porn had my mind reeling with delicious images and this one popped into my head and got me wanting filthy hot sex between these two again. (You know, because apparently I was experiencing a 1.76 second lull).

Date: 2011-10-03 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] danifangirl.livejournal.com
UNFFFFFFFFF.

I THINK THAT IS ALL I HAVE.

WELL. MAYBE A LITTLE VNFHIFJDSLDKGTKES.

AND MORE UNFFFFFFFFFF.

Date: 2011-10-03 02:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
:D *fist pump* I'm glad you liked it, my dear.

Date: 2011-10-03 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_la_belle_fille/
omgord :o this was delicious, gurl. Ariadne is so brazen, rubbing herself and watching them :x I found myself envying her a bit <3

Date: 2011-10-03 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Yeah, I do think she's quite a brazen girl, which is how she ended up being the peeper in this fic. And thank you!

Date: 2011-10-03 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sneaqui.livejournal.com
UNF. YES. Perfect and short and dirty and talkative just the way I like it... Did I just say I like it short? Interesting...

I love this, and I love you for writing it. <3

Date: 2011-10-03 04:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Short but girthy and effective? >_>

And thank you! <3

Date: 2011-10-03 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sin-repent.livejournal.com
OMG!! Ariadne is so lucky!!! *envies*
Sweet jesus, that was brilliant. I love how shortness of it makes it more intense :-P
Hot and rough - perfect!!!<333

Date: 2011-10-03 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Haha! She really, really is. Damn. Thank you! ♥♥♥

Date: 2011-10-03 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chaostheorem.livejournal.com
I know I say this about everything you write, but DAMN, this is hot! Whimpering Arthur. Enough said :D

Date: 2011-10-03 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Whimpering. Yeah, it makes me a little weak. Have you seen this video I posted on my tumblr? (http://eternalsojourn.tumblr.com/post/8564006280/oh-my-god-the-whimpering-nothing-is-more-of-a) VERY MUCH NSFW!

Or this one with the edging? (http://www.xtube.com/watch.php?v=LgRye-C240-) ALSO NSFW. AT ALL. EVEN A LITTLE BIT.

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Date: 2011-10-03 07:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] krytella.livejournal.com
Spanking, edging, dirty talk, and voyeurism. YOU WIN. Yummy!

Date: 2011-10-03 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Yay! I like winning. :D Yeah, when you put it like that, that's kind of a lot going on for 700 words. O_O I'm glad you liked it. <3

Date: 2011-10-03 08:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparrow-hubris.livejournal.com
hnnnng! Edging, OMG. Fucking whimpering to come Arthur. I just can't. But it's so so good. So much hotness packed in so few words.

And Eames' ass, um, yes please!

Date: 2011-10-03 04:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Edging and whimpering: two things in video porn that are hot as fuck when done right and put me right out of it when obviously faked. But that video you told me about with the coach edging w/ nipple play? OMFG. OMFG! Thank you for that. A million thank yous for that. ♥

Date: 2011-10-03 10:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clair3.livejournal.com
abosolutely fab!!!!

Date: 2011-10-03 04:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! <3

Date: 2011-10-03 10:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siliconearth.livejournal.com
OKAY THIS WAS HOT THIS WAS HOT. DID I SAY THIS WAS HOT OH YES I DID.
>stops biting nails and turns caps lock off<
thanks for writing :D

Date: 2011-10-03 04:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Heh. This comment makes me all kinds of happy, thank you!

Date: 2011-10-04 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] night-reveals.livejournal.com
. Unconsciously she slips her hand into her jeans, rubbing at herself over her panties.


have i mentioned how much i fucking love you, lately?


so hot. so awesome. sigh renaaaa<333

Date: 2011-10-04 04:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternalsojourn.livejournal.com
Ahahahah! Oh, Em. ♥

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