Date: 2011-08-11 12:12 pm (UTC)
So I am in danger of just quoting this entire thing back to you, but basically just imagine I'm doing that, because every line was just perfect. You create an amazing and vital setting, and the dialogue fits the time and the characters so well. As always you add a tantalizing undercurrent of menace that just makes their sex (OMFG the sex O_o) and their partnership so much more satisfying. I love how Arthur knows about Eames's knife, how Eames cheats at the poker game to get Arthur to come with him, how Arthur feels that "as Eames drives into him, it’s like he’s digging out Arthur’s past, carving a new shape into him, a new life." I would love to see more of this 'verse if you are moved to write it.

“You said you needed someone with a respectable face. You certainly don’t have one, so it seems you need me,” Arthur says with a smirk. <3
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