This comment! *squeezes you* You've pulled out all the things I tried to do well in this fic, and I'm so glad it felt longer than it is. I began with a really lean storytelling style, and was determined to keep it like that.
I'm also really glad the ending worked for you. It took me a long time before I even looked at how to end it, and after envisioning so much of the violence, this was the only thing that felt natural.
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Date: 2012-01-31 06:08 am (UTC)I'm also really glad the ending worked for you. It took me a long time before I even looked at how to end it, and after envisioning so much of the violence, this was the only thing that felt natural.
Thank you so much for this beautiful comment. ♥♥♥