i am so tired and really i am just apologizing in advanced because this comment is not what it should be but: <font size="10><b>♥</font size></b>
this was so well-done, my dear! i like that you incorporated this whole other element of arthur living in a super sheltered world. it made me think of like, the giver or 1984 or anthem. only...less cynical and gruesome obviously. and eames made such a charming werewolf!
i think you were super successful in your attempt at a larger work in a larger verse with a larger plot. A+++ definitely on my list for future re-reads :))
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<font size="10><b>♥</font size></b> this was so well-done, my dear! i like that you incorporated this whole other element of arthur living in a super sheltered world. it made me think of like, the giver or 1984 or anthem. only...less cynical and gruesome obviously. and eames made such a charming werewolf! i think you were super successful in your attempt at a larger work in a larger verse with a larger plot. A+++ definitely on my list for future re-reads :))