OMFG YOU'RE AMAZING! I want to read everything you've written right the flock now! Okay, so maybe not this second since it's 4am and my flock should probably be roosting, but still, the desire is there!
I loved this so much, you did such an amazing job blending the fairytale with Inception. I especially loved the "World Outside" references, it made this feel like a fairytale without being cheesy or cliched.
Your Eames was so brilliant and deliciously dangerous. His partial transformations were incredibly hot, even though at first I was honestly worried that he might just decide to devour Arthur ;). But then Eames was so sweet and Arthur clearly interested him and you made me really feel for the solitary wanderer existence that Eames was leading. I loved how even though Arthur thought that he was the one benefiting from their friendship, Eames was just as lonely and just as pleased to have someone who didn't judge him. But you managed to keep that dangerous edge to Eames throughout the story, even after it was clear how much he cared for Arthur there was still a feeling of restrained violence to Eames. In fact towards the end I began to be afraid that Eames might follow the fairytale even more closely and eat Arthur's grandmother, severing the connection which was keeping Arthur in his village. (Really, really happy that didn't happen, but I LOVE the fact that I thought it might ;D.)
And Arthur! Sweet, wonderful, curious Arthur! With his notebooks and his questions and his thirst for knowledge, I started out wanting to pinch his cheeks and ended up wanting to jump his bones. I can't get over how seamlessly you had him grow over the summer from bb!Arthur who just wants a friend and someone to answer his questions without thinking he's a freak for wanting to know about the World Outside to a BAMF ready to explore that world for himself.
I'd have words to say about the hotness of the porn but...um... then I start thinking about the hotness of the porn and...unf...yeah...brain go bye-bye. Sflawjefo;jefojwifh!
...I'm back and I think I have the drooling under control now. Anyway, this is an absolutely brilliant fic and I look forward to reading more of your amazingness in the future! :D
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I loved this so much, you did such an amazing job blending the fairytale with Inception. I especially loved the "World Outside" references, it made this feel like a fairytale without being cheesy or cliched.
Your Eames was so brilliant and deliciously dangerous. His partial transformations were incredibly hot, even though at first I was honestly worried that he might just decide to devour Arthur ;). But then Eames was so sweet and Arthur clearly interested him and you made me really feel for the solitary wanderer existence that Eames was leading. I loved how even though Arthur thought that he was the one benefiting from their friendship, Eames was just as lonely and just as pleased to have someone who didn't judge him. But you managed to keep that dangerous edge to Eames throughout the story, even after it was clear how much he cared for Arthur there was still a feeling of restrained violence to Eames. In fact towards the end I began to be afraid that Eames might follow the fairytale even more closely and eat Arthur's grandmother, severing the connection which was keeping Arthur in his village. (Really, really happy that didn't happen, but I LOVE the fact that I thought it might ;D.)
And Arthur! Sweet, wonderful, curious Arthur! With his notebooks and his questions and his thirst for knowledge, I started out wanting to pinch his cheeks and ended up wanting to jump his bones. I can't get over how seamlessly you had him grow over the summer from bb!Arthur who just wants a friend and someone to answer his questions without thinking he's a freak for wanting to know about the World Outside to a BAMF ready to explore that world for himself.
I'd have words to say about the hotness of the porn but...um... then I start thinking about the hotness of the porn and...unf...yeah...brain go bye-bye. Sflawjefo;jefojwifh!
...I'm back and I think I have the drooling under control now. Anyway, this is an absolutely brilliant fic and I look forward to reading more of your amazingness in the future! :D